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Cool story! I like where it's going! All I would say is try to use paragraphs. Right now its just a big intimidating block of text!

On the island of Smoke Hollow, the humans and dragons lived in peace leaving each other alone. Most dragons lived in Moggy forest but, some small dragons like Dwarf dragons live in green medow. The humans lived far away from these places. Many humans believed that dragons were the stuff of myth and ledgend. Others that did believe  in dragons were mostly children round the age of five. Around seven they learnt to do work. The main jobs you saw every year were Farming,Blacksmith and Shopkeppers, but on the odd ocation there would be teacher, judge and builder. Dragons knew the humans weren't the stuff of ledgend an myth many flew over the humans town when humans looked at them most would go 'eh just a bird' others that belived in dragons would go 'OH! LOOK A DRAGON!'. Dragons had leaders or kings they called them Ultra dragons. The newest of these Ultra dragons Zolarfrost thourght the island of Smoke Hollow belong to the dragons. So he declared that he would rage war on the humans in ten years time, during that time he plotted and chuckled and laughed as the plan came togther. This story is the first adventure of our young hero, her story starts three days before Zolarfrost begins.......



Samara breathed in the open freash air. It was early in the morning the sun was high and the birds were singing. Samara continued to work with the crops. It took awhile before she finished. When she had finished she ran inside to check on her mum and dad 'still sleeping' She said to herself. She snuck into the kitchen and grabbed her backpack. Samara then gabbed some food and put it in her backpack. Samara put her backpack on and went outside. Samara was wearing her white t-shirt and jeans. She walked down the road near her house. Samara's blonde hair blew around in the morning wind. After about twenty minutes of walking the road stopped. At the stopping point of the road there was a white fence with a sign on it saying "MOGGY FOREST UP AHEADDO NOT ENTER IF YOU VALUE YOUR LIFE." 'Oh how scary.' said Samara sytasticly to herself. She then climbed over the fence and continued on walking. Half an hour later Samara stopped and had her breakfast. Today it was bread and cheese. The bread was tough and tasteless. The cheese however was rich and creamy. She finished and continued on walking. Ten minutes of walking and Samara found herself at Moggy Forest ' foggy as always' She said queitly to herself ' Today is the day to prove im right about dragons there real.' she added. Samara was eleven and still believed in dragons and had no friends and got teased because she believed in them. Samara entered Moggy forest. She stopped and looked at the trees they had realy thick trunks and they were very very tall. Samara had taken about fifty more steps when she herd a groan 'Who's there?' Samara said suddenly 'hrrrrr....' Samara followed the sound of the groaning . She reached the place were the groaning was loudest. It seemed to get colder but she didn't care the wind blew softly and made it colder. Samara drew in closer and closer when she finaly saw an out line of what was groaning. It was a dragon. Samara was startled so much she hid behind a tree. She clamed herself downand sat next to it. The dragon seemed to be asleep ' Um....Hello?' she said queitly to the dragon. When Samara spoke the dragons eye snapped open. The eyes were yellow and its scales were a greenish blue. 'hurrrrrr....' it moaned Samara looked and saw it had got caught in a old hunters trap. 'oh i'll help you.' she said softly she pulled a knife out of her pocket and cut the ropes ' Your a boy dragon aren't you since you have yellow eyes all the girls have green.' said Samara after cutting the rope, The dragon nodded then roared with joy of being free again. then it thought why would a human save me if were going to rage war on them? i must stop the war with this girl all it'll be the end for all humans on this island. The human started to speak again. ' My name is Samara.' She said 'grawr! grawr!' said the dragon ' Oh you like my name. Hmm how bout i give you one hmm.... How about Arzul? said Samara kindly. The dragon nodded and went closer to Samara. It made a sort of low purring sound. ' Come on Arzul lets go home.' said Samara egar to get home. Arzul nodded and followed Samar out of Moggy forest. Samara turned around to see if Arzul was still following. He was and then she relized what sort of dragon he was. Arzul was a forest flying dragon. Forest flying dragons were very very rare. ' Um Arzul.' Samara said to the dragon. Arzuls eyes widened as ahe spoke. ' Can i ride you home? It would be quicker to get home but no flying just runnin till i get some riding gear for you.' Arzul lied down on his belly. Samara climbed on him and he ran like the wind to Samara's House
gime feedback please

Well here's my first Chapter! Thanks Harmony! Though I must ask you please finish the other Parts before you read this Chapter!

Reading the first part, so far it's super good.

Haha, yes. But thanks!